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Link's avatar

Oooooo another long one for substack I see. As someone who got the book recently I'm still going to enjoy reading these on here. Also the picture at the end is great.

Acorn Sweetleaf's avatar

I think the formatting actually looks a little nicer here than it does in the book! 🤐

Link's avatar

It very well might be I'll have to compare with my copy at home when I'm off work

Shelbo's avatar

Oh I’m really liking the format of this, gotta buy the book now

Acorn Sweetleaf's avatar

Yay! That would be lovely :)

Billy's avatar

I think it’s hot too

Acorn Sweetleaf's avatar

Excellent. Then we're agreed?

Neil rowthorn's avatar

Always need more from you. Your stories are awesome keep it up❤️

Acorn Sweetleaf's avatar

Part two just posted 💖

Freeman's avatar

Oh I love this 😆 not my favorite style (SMS chats) but this one kind of captured my attention.

I'm about to read the second one but I wkinda want to see the pictures now 😅

Phil P Shepherd's avatar

I love it - it’s believable, hilarious (and keeps getting more so as the calamities mount up - and it’s surprisingly hot into the bargain.

Acorn Sweetleaf's avatar

Thank you for commenting on the believability! I pride myself on it (but do push it quite far sometimes!)

Klara's avatar

This reminds me of the book “Deception” by Philip Roth!

Acorn Sweetleaf's avatar

You commented on one of my posts 🥹

Also yes I just looked it up and it looks good! I love epistolary stuff x

ShadowWalker's avatar

This SMS chat style is something different, but I like it👍🏻

It's like being allowed to stand right behind her back and watch her chat with both of them.

Somehow private but opened up. Like she's the one best friend that shares absolutely everything with the reader.

Really nice variety in style ☺️

Stran Dong's avatar

This is so fun and awkward 😅 great share...

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Acorn Sweetleaf's avatar

haha thanks, proud of that one