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Link's avatar

The beginning started Oh so sensual and suggestive. Then went to horny and teasing. The very last part really dived fully into Dom behavior and was a perfect escalation. Just perfect can't wait for more.

ShadowWalker's avatar

You're totally right👍

He already has fallen prey to her, without any chance or even will to escape.

This one is possibly one of her hottest stories. As it is far from over in this chapter it may be one of her longest, too. I love long stories, so I'm totally fine with it - not that I don't like her short ones at all, they're masterly and I love them, too. As well as her poetry.

I'm looking forward to every following chapter (and every new story as well) as I know it just will become better and better.

She already is an outstanding writer but still seems to improve further and further.

Jason D's avatar

So good! I love the slow tease!

Stran Dong's avatar

So incredibly hot 🔥

Matt's avatar

Ur best work imo