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Vikinglord / Steven's avatar

Great setup. Little "sister" is going to have her way. I believe you're in for a great ride.

adie's avatar

Such a hot topic 🔥 I'm thinking a double meaning in water pressure 🤔 she had you wet before the shower 🚿

Acorn Sweetleaf's avatar

This is true. Very astute!

Some Things About Me's avatar

Oh shit. You know I have good water pressure in my shower too…maybe I should advertise.

Kitty Mae's avatar

Oh wow, bi-panic called, she says thank you for a great story! 🫶🏻

Kitty Mae's avatar

There’s too many pretty people, what else are you supposed to do…

Doug's avatar

Liked this a lot.

Especially the spare, abbreviated text. Almost an outline format. It’s like we are experiencing a memory vs a detailed retelling of events. Nice.

Oh, and pretty hot too. 👍

Acorn Sweetleaf's avatar

Thank you! I like this one too. Done a couple like this, always enjoy it :)

Link's avatar

Nice poem. Normally you hear it be the opposite but I like the switch.